Hi October!, I liked how you showed pictures to support your information. I also liked how your instructions were very defined and very helpful, I will follow your instructions next time and will bake a rich chocolate cake. Maybe next time you could tell the audience how it felt eating your cake to make your information interesting. Well done! - Maui
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Hi October!, I liked how you showed pictures to support your information. I also liked how your instructions were very defined and very helpful, I will follow your instructions next time and will bake a rich chocolate cake. Maybe next time you could tell the audience how it felt eating your cake to make your information interesting. Well done!
- Maui
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